WALT: Edit and proof read our writing.
1. Someone had digging holes allover the place. Eve suspected it was Cecil but Matt suspected it was Skulla. They found the rest of the rothery stones in the redwoods in and there was a big explosion in whakarewera.
PLUS:
that they finally found the diamonds.
MINUS:
that there was a big explosion in whakarewera
and there was someone digging holes.
INTERESTING:
whats going to happen to Jackson and about
Jack boults death.
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